Finding your voice
In 1962, a seven-year-old boy named Edward boarded a ship with his family and sailed from the life he knew in Holland to a new life in America. The family had no money. All their [...]
The entrepreneur’s “DNA test” (which type are you?)
Wanna know what defines an entrepreneur? It isn’t the “billion dollar” ideas… Or the scrappy rebelliousness… Or even the ability to create revenue. Those things are inherent in most [...]
The #1 instinct of a great copywriter?
Rather than tell you the answer, I’d like to show you… by sharing this incredible exchange between a member of my community who left nursing to become a freelance copywriter, and a [...]
If writing copy is just not clicking for you…
I bought an acoustic guitar from a pawn shop in Louisville, KY. This was around 1994. I was living on the road, touring the comedy circuit, with lots of time to kill between shows. [...]
5 things I wish I knew when I started writing copy
It thrills me to meet new copywriters at their enthusiastic best. I love guiding them through to the next levels, helping them avoid the nasty traps that derail progress. Looking back to when I [...]
[Story Sells] How a “Ticking Time Bomb” Helps Capture Attention
Nothing motivates action like a time limit. It’s why sales and coupons don’t last forever. Deadlines seem to be hard-wired into our brains. It goes back to caveman days: “We get home before sun [...]
[Story Sells] The Booster Rocket Tactic to launching a product’s Big Idea
We live in the “golden age of television”, we are told. First premium cable, and now streaming, unshackled us from the constraints of storytelling dominated by commercial breaks. Now we [...]
[Story Sells] The ‘Miracle” of Long Copy
Over the holidays, I was watching one particular Santa-based movie with my family which delivered a powerful lesson about story and reveals what we need to make the sale. So before [...]
[Story Sells] Use this Spider-Man ‘Twist’ to Make Your Sales Story Unforgettable
There’s one story principle that’s tough to execute, but very valuable if you do it right. This principle gives a story added depth. What does that mean? Simply, the tale penetrates deeper into [...]
[Story Sells] “Ice-Breakers” in Ads: How To Gradually Introduce a Radical Idea
J.R.R. Tolkien had a big problem. He loved the ancient, epic tales. He began writing his own (see The Silmarillion). But he quickly discovered that these ancient worlds of honor and vengeance, [...]
[Story Sells] Beef Up Before and After Testimonials with this Story Technique
In Blake Snyder’s useful screenwriting how-to book, Save The Cat, he talks about two scenes you must have in your movie. An opening image. And a closing image. And one more thing: They should be [...]
[Story Sells] How Factoid Copy Can Be Fun, A-TEAM Style
You know the game is on when B.A. grabs the welding torch. I’m talking about the scene late in an A-TEAM episode when the gang needs to build something superfast to save the day. Usually involves [...]
[Story Sells] How to Name Your Products So They Stick
Han Solo. Gilderoy Lockhart. Benjamin Grimm. These names of fictional characters are easy to remember. Why? For one thing, they are all examples of “sympathetic naming”. That’s where you name a [...]
[Story Sells] How to Answer Customer Objections with the “Death Star” Solution
As I write this, San Diego’s Comic Con just wrapped up. Fans were served tasty selections of their favorite fictional universes. Predictably, some offerings unleashed a flurry of geek-citement. [...]
3 Ways To Ethically Steal Profitable Ideas From Memes
In 2017, it’s dang-near impossible to scroll down any social feed without smacking into a meme. The rise of 10+ million follower comedy brands like @thefatjewish and @fuckjerry (who pump out [...]
The 1-Sentence “RAD” Trick That Transforms a Commodity into a Brand
We live in the age of Branded Characters. Leave no lunchbox unclaimed by a caped crusader or a spiffy cartoon. Thank goodness. Who wants a boring blue box when you can have a universe of [...]
How to use the “Doctors Dumbfounded” effect to Build Credibility & Desire: From Shyamalan to Schwartz
There’s a simple story technique you can use to quickly build credibility and desire for your product. The best novelists and filmmakers use it, as so do the best ad-slingers. In fact, Eugene [...]
The 5 C’s of Indoctrination: Essential Website Elements To Welcome Cold Prospects And Convert The Curious
If you only sell to people who know the value of your product or service you’ll quickly run out of new customers, doomed to forever be a small fish flopping around in a shallow pool of revenue. [...]
[Story Sells] Prevent prospects from abandoning your ad by fixing the “Broken Film” mistake
I used to work at a movie theater in high school. One of my best jobs ever. I could watch any movie for free, and eat all the popcorn and drink all the soda I wanted. But some days were bad. When [...]
[Story Sells] How to win the war against wandering attention with the “John Ford Maneuver”
You know when you’re sitting in a movie theater and hear all the noise before the film begins? The flash of phone screens, the chatter, the rustling in seats, the unwrapping of a big box of Red [...]
How to tell your story like Tolkien (and stop losing prospects to your competitors)
If you had to tell me your story right this second, would you be able to do it … or would you choke? You’d think it’s easy explaining who you are and why people should care. But if this were [...]
[Story Sells] The Joy of Bob Ross: the hidden selling technique used by this mild-mannered painter in nearly every episode
When I feel stressed out at the end of the day, and I need to relax, I’ve got something better than single malt scotch. I tune in to an artist with a big ‘fro named Bob Ross, and step in his [...]
David Bowie: The Ultimate Artist-As-Entrepreneur?
June 2017 marks 50 years since David Bowie released his first album. The title of this landmark record? Somewhat unimaginatively, it was called: David Bowie. Ironic, because nothing else in [...]
[Story Sells] The Harry Potter trick to easier storytelling
Got a “productivity hack” for you today. Especially for all you procrastinators out there, as you sit down in consternation at your vintage Corona-Smith typewriter. (If you’re a hipster or an [...]
[Story Sells] Establish Authority by Copying This Novelist Trick
Can you establish credibility while lying your ass off? Yep. Novelists and other storytellers do it all the time. And when you tell true stories as a marketer, you can copy their technique [...]
Boost Your Conversions by Thinking Like a Lawyer
Add strong proof elements to your marketing materials and watch your sales soar. The young lawyer wrapped up his closing argument. He felt confident in his performance over the course of the [...]
The Conscious Consumer: Who they are and why you need to know about them
I’ve been watching this for a while and wondering if others have noticed it too. The modern-day consumer is more aware and conscious than ever before. For us as marketers, copywriters and [...]
The Voice Mistakes That Are Costing You Money (And How To Fix Them)
How do you measure whether your voice is a success? Here’s a quick test. Try reading this out loud: It’s impossible not to read it in Liam Neeson’s voice. If you’ve nailed voice, that’s exactly [...]
[Story Sells] How to Capture Drifting Attention with the Captain “Hook” Rule
You will lose sales unless you hook your customer’s attention with the very first sentence. But what do you say? Well, to figure that out, let’s look at what not to do. And then just do the [...]
Stephen King’s IT And The Secret To Creating Emotion-Driven Copy That Converts
It’s one of the most notorious openings to any novel… Shocking, gruesome… …and so very, very vivid. From Stephen King’s epic 1986 tale, IT: “A small boy in a yellow slicker and red galoshes [...]
[Story Sells] The “Mother Rule” for Keeping Faith with your Prospect
Sell on emotion, justify with logic? Yes, but … Stories teach us that emotions have a logic of their own. We may be irrational, unknowable creatures … But at least in stories, emotions must [...]
4 Things You Should Be Testing But Probably Aren’t
I remember when I first deadlifted a barbell. Before that moment, I hesitated to pick up the 12.5lb dumbbells at bootcamp classes. So when I heard the barbell is 20kg (44.4 pounds) without plates [...]
[Story Sells] Use this Screenwriter Secret to Hold Your Audience’s Attention
So the other day I was reading a book to my 4-year-old and I realized something strange: I want to know how this story ends. The storyteller had sunk his hook into me. So when it came time to [...]
Here’s The Secret To Copy That Keeps Your Prospects Coming Back For More
Recently a writer wanted her copy critiqued for an email lead generation campaign. It was for a watch targeted to bodybuilders. The writing style was “upbeat and cheerful.” Hey, wait a minute. [...]
[Story Sells] How To Make Your “AHA!” Moment Believable with this “Dr. Strange” Magic Trick
The latest Marvel blockbuster ‘Dr. Strange’ makes you believe in magic. To the tune of $653 million and counting. And one of the secrets of the believability is a little storytelling magic trick [...]
The #1 Way You’re Accidentally Killing Your Own Sales… And How To Fix It
As an entrepreneur in the self-improvement world, you’re pouring a ton of blood, sweat and tears into your business on a daily basis… You’re creating life-changing products and [...]
[Story Sells] How to Win Your Customer’s Belief in 3 Seconds
Many blockbuster campaigns are built on the shoulders of the “Big Idea”. But before your customer will buy your product, she has to buy into that idea. How do you win her belief? You don’t want [...]
[Story Sells] Use this Dr. Seuss Writing Trick to Write Better Copy
Do you like Green Eggs and Ham? Most people do – the book by Dr. Seuss, that is. It’s the highest-selling Seuss book of all time, edging out The Cat in The Hat and other favorites. It’s sold 17.5 [...]
How to 2X the value of your case studies (follow these 4 steps)
You already know case studies inspire hope, prove you’re credible, and give your reader that “If they can do it, so can I!” feeling that makes them take action. But done right, they can do [...]
[Story Sells] Quickly Grab a Prospect’s Attention with these “Werewolves”
When I was in 5th grade, I woke up extra early on Halloween morning and took a seat in the makeup chair. My dad had a plane to catch in a few hours but before he did, he smothered grease paint on [...]
[Story Sells] Sell On Emotion, Justify With This …
My nephew recently asked me how The Flash got his super-speed powers. My answer: “Barry Allen was struck by lightning while standing in front of a shelf of chemicals. The combination of the [...]
How to create deep, instant connection with your audience
“You’ve got to stop buying into your own bullshit.” With that line, he built a deeper connection and showed he could help me. I was on the phone with a productivity coach. We were talking about [...]
[Story Sells] The copywriting secret that helped this summer blockbuster rake in $1.6 Billion dollars
When I was a teenager, I stood in a long line to watch the first Jurassic Park. I had just read the novel in one big gulp and I was dying to see real dinosaurs on the screen. I wasn’t alone. The [...]
How To Write Badass Bullets Your Readers Simply Can’t Resist
Bullets — they’re those titillating snippets of copy designed to tempt your reader into taking action… Have you ever read one so intriguing you couldn’t get it out of your head? Where you [...]
House of Cards Persuasion Lessons
Enjoy a sneak peak into the Copy Chief private forums via this excellent post by Founding Member Ross O’Lochlainn… Are you a fan of House of Cards? If not, you should be. I [...]
The amazing two-sentence answer to “what do you do?”
Have you ever noticed that the companies we love the most are usually rooted in rebellion? For instance… Apple started in the garage after Jobs and Wozniak left college, fed up by the slow pace [...]